tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post114270263490781123..comments2023-10-26T02:42:50.519-07:00Comments on susies the boss: 55 FridayShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03706844568750488890noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-9811932823244942222011-07-22T11:39:09.317-07:002011-07-22T11:39:09.317-07:00Ok, just stumbling on to your site. Here is a sto...Ok, just stumbling on to your site. Here is a story in a sentence, perhaps. And I think it is 55 words, but I get dizzy when counting things:<br /><br />I awoke on my back on a bed of feathers that clung to my wet skin, and the sky was a black cloudless, moonless, starless emptiness that seemed to have swallowed all the nights I'd ever known, and I shivered to think of what dawn might be like, or if dawn would come at all.mythopolishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03164758700393086005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-71466209295960935742011-06-16T20:28:50.279-07:002011-06-16T20:28:50.279-07:00First time.
CEO Lament*
Lost in her eyes I could...First time.<br /><br />CEO Lament*<br /><br />Lost in her eyes I could not express<br />At that moment in time my love’s excess<br />She captured my heart with one little glance<br />But blind to my mind’s eye jubilant dance<br />By chance she brushed by me<br />I became weak in the knees<br />Almost dropped what I held<br />I looked like a bad trainee<br /><br />© 2011 Michael Yost<br />*It’s 55 words Does it count?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-60171875537658006742011-04-15T02:55:38.821-07:002011-04-15T02:55:38.821-07:00Nice story! Mine is hereFiction 55 -PhotoNice story! Mine is here<a href="http://perpetualthinkings.blogspot.com/2011/03/fiction-55-photo.html" rel="nofollow">Fiction 55 -Photo</a>Uma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-69284353947298515462011-03-25T23:13:32.887-07:002011-03-25T23:13:32.887-07:00I would like to try writing 55 word piece but do n...I would like to try writing 55 word piece but do not know where to start. Do you give us a theme or a picture and then we write about it? Or do we come up with our own topic. I look forward to reading your story. Cheers.Shanae Branhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16788563284474098409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-40135988734406684162011-03-02T14:44:35.374-08:002011-03-02T14:44:35.374-08:00Wonderful post!
My fiction 55 :
http://perpetualt...Wonderful post!<br /> My fiction 55 :<br />http://perpetualthinkings.blogspot.com/2011/02/fiction-55-wounds.htmlUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-67188886590026550132011-02-11T05:01:35.148-08:002011-02-11T05:01:35.148-08:00That was a wonderful 55 Fiction!
Mine is here
ht...That was a wonderful 55 Fiction!<br /><br />Mine is here <br />http://perpetualthinkings.blogspot.com/2011/02/55-fiction-change.htmlUma Anandanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-52493783657361539522010-12-30T22:10:55.364-08:002010-12-30T22:10:55.364-08:00this is my first time on 55friday n i just loved i...this is my first time on 55friday n i just loved it susie...heres my contri....<br /><br />Cold winter evening just below the street light my eyes captured a shivering innocence. His face had turned pale wanting a tender care. My approach was unexpected but desired & as I managed to pass him some comfort, nothing was exchanged between us. It wasn’t required as we were already in a relationship called “HUMANITY”.Jyotikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01659160978815377031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-21654717763613727442010-09-17T10:31:08.644-07:002010-09-17T10:31:08.644-07:00I watched him that day, first standing by the stre...I watched him that day, first standing by the stream and then jumping from rock to rock. I thought about how lucky I was to know this man to know his innocence to know his love. In my own innocence I thought he would always be with me. I was wrong, I never knew him.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-51146507256867027142010-06-07T19:01:02.488-07:002010-06-07T19:01:02.488-07:00Hmmm, I came across your cool blog by Brian Miller...Hmmm, I came across your cool blog by Brian Miller's WayStationOne blog and the G-Man Blog...Are you from India? You know I've always loved all things Indian. I'm even going there next month! woohoo!<br />In the meantime, I'm going to look around some more at your blog.Ms. Gibsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17860597747489481690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-9733452822890288732010-05-26T03:36:03.971-07:002010-05-26T03:36:03.971-07:00I haven't mastered linking, so this is last we...I haven't mastered linking, so this is last weeks-<br /><br />Sunday sermon comes on low<br />murmurs of the kitchen radio<br />cabled deep from a world war<br />twining coffee steam head to heart,<br />drifting westward to a dim green counter<br />chrome edge pointing to an open window<br />and a porch shading morning's<br />bright promise a red roan horse<br />walking way beyond triple strands of wire.izzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-64080520542754215232010-05-07T09:55:47.573-07:002010-05-07T09:55:47.573-07:00Oh, this paints such an awesome picture in my mind...Oh, this paints such an awesome picture in my mind!! Great post. You can find mine here: <br /><br />http://horaceandbabydoe.blogspot.com/Kathyhttp://horaceandbabydoe.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-60884121782784390222010-04-14T07:04:15.007-07:002010-04-14T07:04:15.007-07:00Here's mine.
High warm winds blew grit into J...Here's mine.<br /><br />High warm winds blew grit into Jana’s legs like ants biting her as she walked to school. Tumbleweeds rolled across the dry field, bounced into the road and stopped at a fence ahead of her. It was 1956 and the Santa Ana winds were ripping through San Bernardino. It was a metaphor for her life.Pathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04587300140099806425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-86048376003912538682010-03-12T12:26:29.414-08:002010-03-12T12:26:29.414-08:00Here's mine...
Yesterday Morning
Awake too e...Here's mine...<br /><br />Yesterday Morning<br /><br />Awake too early. Dressed for work, my eve I plot. iPhone in tow I start my day. Out the drive I’m on my way. Rain falls…I<br />sit in traffic. No worries, no fright. From behind I’m struck by<br />his truck. We check, no damage-what luck! I’m on my way thankful<br />for this blessed day.<br /><br />http://inspiredsyntax.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/yesterday-morning/<br /><br />~ISAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-55793350701850024472009-10-01T22:37:05.362-07:002009-10-01T22:37:05.362-07:00Ok, here's mine.
The weathered, grey haired,...Ok, here's mine. <br /><br />The weathered, grey haired, former Marine tugged on the clutch lever and eased a tattered boot heel down on the shifter as he watched the speedo ease up to 60. A quickly setting sun melted into the quiet ocean passing on his right. Ahead, the night and an uncertain future. He would remember this ride.orionsbownoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-84400898359839169452009-10-01T14:33:30.223-07:002009-10-01T14:33:30.223-07:00"Oh no," I cried, "Why is that man ..."Oh no," I cried, "Why is that man stopped in the intersection?" The man got out of his car, flashers on, and starts "shoo-ing" something. Another man stopped, ran over and picked up a panicked turtle! Jogging, he placed it in a lake while traffic patiently watched. Both men - marriage material, I say!Bubbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13387278341086830951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-35665585454870535592009-07-31T04:33:55.786-07:002009-07-31T04:33:55.786-07:00HERE IS MINE!
Walking down the street
She looked u...HERE IS MINE!<br />Walking down the street<br />She looked up<br />and saw him, by the window<br />He saw her down there too<br />A glimpse and another<br />A smile<br />Both full of words<br />of desire<br />'Shall I tell her to wait?'<br />'Shall I wink at him and wave my hand?'<br />Neither did.<br />Love flew away<br />in just a second.Dulçe ♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-32754244992716642002009-06-26T21:57:47.037-07:002009-06-26T21:57:47.037-07:00A Great Way to Vent!!
They all want a piece of me...A Great Way to Vent!!<br /><br />They all want a piece of me, I can't get away. I should feel wanted but I just want to run. I can't stand being in my own skin. <br /><br />They are ankle biting, advise seeking, love reassuring, stationary position, knife stabbing, eye rolling, absent minded, sneakily mischevious, paranoidly controlling, sex starved, wabbling drunk and stoned!!BringMeFlowers00https://www.blogger.com/profile/06516345225420835896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-57123094202464906642009-02-20T11:45:00.000-08:002009-02-20T11:45:00.000-08:00Creative 55's!HIS MARK IS WORSE THAN HIS BARKCreative 55's!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://nickersandinkblog.blogspot.com/2009/02/his-mark-is-worse-than-his-bark.html" REL="nofollow">HIS MARK IS WORSE THAN HIS BARK</A>LA Nickershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14891624164014505323noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-78419148210422764672009-01-30T17:55:00.000-08:002009-01-30T17:55:00.000-08:00The Angel frantically ran past the Pearly Gates, a...The Angel frantically ran past the Pearly Gates, across the gold cobbled stones, and up the golden staircase, screaming “Heaven is ending! Heaven is ending!" Other Angels tried to comfort her but she was beside herself with fear. God finally touched her. “Fear not,” He calmly said. “Heaven is still here. It has not . . . “ phffffft!Jeaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11577643691627143227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-81354220346113265112009-01-01T16:36:00.000-08:002009-01-01T16:36:00.000-08:00Back writing a little again. Stop by if you can.h...Back writing a little again. Stop by if you can.<BR/><BR/>http://redheels27205.blogspot.com/Redheelshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11355779025111421922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-56578701146040694182008-09-20T07:59:00.000-07:002008-09-20T07:59:00.000-07:00Love it!I am new at this too and enjoy reading oth...Love it!<BR/>I am new at this too and enjoy reading others 55's.<BR/><BR/>Pleasure.Liquidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03515708086582181923noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-85545243790785080072008-07-12T13:00:00.000-07:002008-07-12T13:00:00.000-07:00~~ Friday 55 ~~Savory sourkraut in its perfectionT...~~ Friday 55 ~~<BR/><BR/>Savory sourkraut in its perfection<BR/><BR/>The deli horseradish mustard with the right bite.<BR/><BR/>Ketchup, carefully made from succulent tomatoes.<BR/><BR/>The bun, fresh from a bakery, maybe even still warm, just the right length <BR/><BR/>Pickle relish, just a little more than a tablespoon.<BR/><BR/>All this for the juicy Johnsonville brat, grilled to a crusty brown.<BR/><BR/>YUMMM !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-76096444548043197712008-07-06T19:20:00.000-07:002008-07-06T19:20:00.000-07:00Hmm. I'm also a 55 virgin, so be gentle (please?)...Hmm. I'm also a 55 virgin, so be gentle (please?). Usally these kinda things you link back to your efforts in a comment, so here you go... my first 55 <A HREF="http://mojo11.blogspot.com/2008/07/55-flash-fiction-friday-sleeveless.html" REL="nofollow">Sleeveless</A>Mojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03498213932233245032noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-39852864074540519952008-02-13T21:18:00.000-08:002008-02-13T21:18:00.000-08:00This is my first time on 55. I would appreciate a...This is my first time on 55. I would appreciate any comments.<BR/><BR/>http://myrtlebeachramblings.blogspot.com/myrtle beached whalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18338457419555984753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11658057.post-91926007263996548192007-11-09T03:09:00.000-08:002007-11-09T03:09:00.000-08:00First time listener, first time caller. I hope no...First time listener, first time caller. I hope nobody minds my intrusion... I came across this randomly while looking for inspiration to get my brand-spaking-new blog up and running (I'm looking to find a meme a day, and this is my new Friday meme!). Anyway, I've posted my attempt at my blog:<BR/>www.smarmoofus.com<BR/>*agrees with artfulsub* Very neat concept! I've linked back.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com