Friday, September 14, 2007

55Flash Fiction Friday

He held her hands and looked into those eyes as candle light played off her glowing skin, no denying that tonight sparks would lead to something very special indeed.
Just then, the approaching waiter tripped over her crossed legs and stilletto, which dangled from her toe, sending showers of spaghetti and meatballs onto their smoldering laps.

**OK OK, so maybe "smoldering laps" doesn't quite work, but it would be a great name for a rock band, wouldn't it?
Sewzy and the Smoldering Laps!!

If you recognize this 55, you are right, it's recycled. But since there are a lot of new bloggers doing 55 right now, it's new to them, right? Might take me the entire gosh darned weekend, but I'll get over to read those 55's, I promise!

17 comments:

MIke Kilgore said...

Susie, it was new to me...Hilarious! Talk about a romance killer! Love those stillettos...Mines up.

Snow White said...

I hadn't read it before! That sounds about like my luck with dates. LOL

I'm up! Have a great weekend!

Mike M said...

Great 55!!

SignGurl said...

I loved it, Susie!! That would probably happen to me.

I played along this week.

MONA said...

LOL! heat killed by heat!

Mine's up too!

snowelf said...

Ahh!! And she probably was wearing her best dress!!

Happy Friday, Susie!!

--snow :)

WDKY said...

Smouldering laps? Interesting :-)

jillie said...

It's early but I did a 55!!! Even BEFORE the coffee kicked in...lol!!

Happy Friday to you ;o)

lime said...

certainly a worthy reprint ;)

Top cat said...

lol, that's a great 55 susie!
perhaps a lap dinner is the forerunner of a lap dance.:)
tc

ArtfulSub said...

Smoldering laps? Funny stuff. I'm up. First timer. Workplace safe.

S said...

OK Sorry about the smoldering laps thing.....i do not claim to be a writer! :P

Polt said...

Smoldering laps? Ooo, is it a bad thing that this makes me all tingly inside?

I dont have my 55 up yet, but I will later tonight!

HuGS....

Toadee said...

new to me susie and a very well written piece. Thank you, I'm glad I've got into this

barman said...

I finally posted a 55 a little late.

Very nice. I sit there and wish I could write like that, smoldering laps and all. You done good Susie. Very nice indeed.

Rebicmel said...

The mom jeans omg to funny and your flash is fantastic.. lol eek hot spaghetti table four their laps lol

Toadee said...

I came back for more, I've done another 55 :o)