Friday, October 12, 2007

55Flash Fiction Friday

Spykidsmom

Carmens heart raced as she rushed down the precarious pathway, eyes darting this way and that, alert to the enemy nearby.
Ducking behind a parked Aerialtransportdevice™, she congratulated herself for remembering her Communicationspymoduleunitcompactmirror™, and pressing the activate button, summoned her partner in crime.
"Agent Cortez, devaporize at once, I've forgotten how to work this damn razr!"
**UPDATE**All techno devices have been TM'd and so therefor are now real words and not cheating! :D
Hey, guess what I finally got? A real cell phone, not one of those lame tracfones that i've been carrying around for three years. Those days are over. I'm talking a burgundy razr phone like a real spy, erm, I mean adult. I can hardly wait to play detectives with Little Rita in the orchard with the phones. But wait, before you go callin me, this whole modern phone dealie is a present for Little Rita, so it's gonna have to wait until after her birthday on October 23rd. Sheesh, by then I might even know how to work my phone well enough to be communicating with Agents 99 and 76, Maxwell Smart.
Hey, we've come a long way from the shoe phone!
Have a lovely weekend and if you need to know more about Flash Fiction, check the sidebar over there for more info!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, LIME!

32 comments:

Snow White said...

Great 55, Susie, and good luck with that new phone. I need a new one, but keep putting it off. It's so hard figuring out a new one.

I'm up... twice! I gave J his own post this week... you'll see why!

Happy Friday! xox

Top cat said...

ha ha very nice and I'm always a bit nervous approaching precarious pathways.:)

tc

G-Man said...

Oh Susie...
Aerialtransportdevice?
Whatever makes it work eh?.I loved it!..Anyway, I'm up!.And I was almost 1st on your post, as Max would say.."Missed it by THAT much!"
Have a great Week-End sweetie.
xoxox

SignGurl said...

Great 55, S! I think you cheated though by using compound words like communicationspymoduleunitcompact, LMAO!

I played this week with a nod to my nemesis.

Mike M said...

Love the 55!! Love the phone too!

WDKY said...

Very good, although communicationspymoduleunitcompactmirrors are now considered to be yesterday's science.

Pink is always good, though :-)

(Oh yes - Happy Birthday Lime!!!)

Seamus said...

So you have your agents just waiting in vapors????? ;)

Polt said...

hehehe, loved the 55...although I think you cheated a little, shoving all those words together to make one. But it was a scifi 55, so who knows, they may actually BE words. :)

HAPPY BIRTHDAY LIME!!!!!

Oh, and I played.

HUGS...

S said...

In fact, yes, those really are the names of those devices, not cheatin at all! :D this is fiction, isnt it? Who said we cant make up our own words?

MONA said...

Is that really one name? :D

Susie, I played...& yes Happy Limebirthday!

Rebicmel said...

Congrats on the phone, and I loved all the spy kid movies lol remember lava girl and shark boy? okay mom's with kids will anyway lol....

Loved the flash.

Have a great weekend and enjoy your phone.

hey great way to use more than fifty five words too.

Little Wing said...

This is hilarious Susie!
I love it.

Logophile said...

Teehee
Imma call you on your
Communicationspymoduleunitcompactmirror™ on October 24th
:p

Sophia said...

That is an awesome 55! Good luck learning your Razr! They're not as scary as they seem.

Mine is up now :)

cathy said...

you put a smile on my face.not that easy of late. THANKYOU.

Toadee said...

great 'compacted' 55

when you figure out the phone come and give me lessons.

I'm up!

LisaPizza said...

At least you have a cell phone, and now a nice new Razr! I'm still living in landline world. No kids, so no emergent needs I guess. But I do have a new digital camera - Sony DSC-T200r. Still need a scanner, an mp3, a HDTV w/bluray and a cell to be completely techno current. Haven't blogged much lately cuz we've been having connection problems at inopportune moments. Steve's been trying to post a video w/out much success perhaps you can coach him.

snowelf said...

Congrats on your new phone!
I am such a lover of cell phones.

I LOVED your approach this week Susie SpyMom!

happy espionage!!

--snow
(who played, but took forever to get over here)

Gawpo said...

SEVENTY-six?

Did you mean EIGHTY-six?

Or is there a joke in there I didn't get (smart)?

My dad just bought the 5 disk series of the first season. Hilarious, still.

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