Thursday, October 18, 2007

55Flash Fiction Friday

After the hunt
before the last bit of life had drained from the beast
they surrounded and fell upon it
tearing gnashing
bumping each other and jockeying for space
tremendous whipping and whirling commenced
unsupressed cravings
bits flew about
afterward
not a scrap left over
satiated
they retreat
oh the joys of a birthday party pinata....


LOL Tonight is Little Rita's 11th birthday party. There will be 13 -11 year old girls in this house, pizza, potato chips, cake, and pinata. Loud music, musical chairs, about 100 balloons...This house is small. Will the Ratburn and I survive? Stay tuned!

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30 comments:

Logophile said...

LAND SHARK!
:p
If you have to run away and make a sanity phone call, baby, you've got my number.

Snow White said...

Oh my! I shudder at the memory of a big sleepover. GREAT 55! Y'all have fun tonight.

Oh, and I'm up... alone this week.

Top cat said...

LMAO you are soooo good at this.
What an ending!:)
Good luck on the party..you'll need it.
YOu both better start chanting OM now.:)
tc

barman said...

Oh I so feel for Mr Ratburn. I have a headache already just thinking about it. Just make sure no one mistakes you for the pinata. Very nice 55. By the way, I just posted a 55 a little while ago.

Happy birthday to Little Rita, good luck with the party, and have a wonderful weekend Susie.

Mike M said...

You're truly the Master of the 55!

Polt said...

Heheheeh, great comparison!!!!

11 13 year old girls sleeping over...oh the horror, the HORROR!!

BTW, I played as well today.

HUGS...

lime said...

i'm thinkin you should hide in the yurt.

lime said...

oh eyah, i played too and it's WAAAY weird

Rebicmel said...

Awesome 55 and yes parties with young teenagers can be like that. I would hate to be in the middle of it all. I bet it is a blast though. Hoping you and your hubby survived. LOL

Have a great weekend.

Seamus said...

Your's sounds like the food fest my miscreants had yesterday!
You'll probably survive ... well ... maybe not your sanity! ;)

Stealth said...

ahahahahah!!! I love your Flash Fiction :) :)

You crack me up! I hope you survive the sleepover :P

Happy Birfday to the lil one :)

Little Wing said...

Susie, great 55 and you are going to love every second of it!

snowelf said...

Aren't slumber parties the best!?! Hope there isn't too much girly drama!!
And yea, Pinata, you're going down.

--snow :)

Flash said...

Well tell her that the Flash says Happy Birthday!!!!

kids and pinatas scare the hell out of me...all those sticks....

Flash said...

Greta 551 by the way.

Toadee said...

brilliant 55!
I've hosted to many of those parties.

I'm up (better late than never, perhaps)

Anonymous said...

Good Luck Aunt Susie!!
-Aubrey

Cosima said...

Happy Birthday to Rita!

Please tell Mr Ratburn to move away when the sharks attack the Pinata.

LisaPizza said...

Happy Birthday Little Rita! Don't cha just love a pinata? Can't wait to hear the party survivor's tales.

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