After the huntbefore the last bit of life had drained from the beast
they surrounded and fell upon it
tearing gnashing
bumping each other and jockeying for space
tremendous whipping and whirling commenced
unsupressed cravings
bits flew about
afterward
not a scrap left over
satiated
they retreat
oh the joys of a birthday party pinata....
LOL Tonight is Little Rita's 11th birthday party. There will be 13 -11 year old girls in this house, pizza, potato chips, cake, and pinata. Loud music, musical chairs, about 100 balloons...This house is small. Will the Ratburn and I survive? Stay tuned!
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29 comments:
LAND SHARK!
:p
If you have to run away and make a sanity phone call, baby, you've got my number.
Oh my! I shudder at the memory of a big sleepover. GREAT 55! Y'all have fun tonight.
Oh, and I'm up... alone this week.
LMAO you are soooo good at this.
What an ending!:)
Good luck on the party..you'll need it.
YOu both better start chanting OM now.:)
tc
Oh I so feel for Mr Ratburn. I have a headache already just thinking about it. Just make sure no one mistakes you for the pinata. Very nice 55. By the way, I just posted a 55 a little while ago.
Happy birthday to Little Rita, good luck with the party, and have a wonderful weekend Susie.
You're truly the Master of the 55!
Heheheeh, great comparison!!!!
11 13 year old girls sleeping over...oh the horror, the HORROR!!
BTW, I played as well today.
HUGS...
i'm thinkin you should hide in the yurt.
oh eyah, i played too and it's WAAAY weird
Your's sounds like the food fest my miscreants had yesterday!
You'll probably survive ... well ... maybe not your sanity! ;)
ahahahahah!!! I love your Flash Fiction :) :)
You crack me up! I hope you survive the sleepover :P
Happy Birfday to the lil one :)
Susie, great 55 and you are going to love every second of it!
Aren't slumber parties the best!?! Hope there isn't too much girly drama!!
And yea, Pinata, you're going down.
--snow :)
Well tell her that the Flash says Happy Birthday!!!!
kids and pinatas scare the hell out of me...all those sticks....
Greta 551 by the way.
brilliant 55!
I've hosted to many of those parties.
I'm up (better late than never, perhaps)
Good Luck Aunt Susie!!
-Aubrey
Happy Birthday to Rita!
Please tell Mr Ratburn to move away when the sharks attack the Pinata.
Happy Birthday Little Rita! Don't cha just love a pinata? Can't wait to hear the party survivor's tales.
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