Friday, November 09, 2007

55Flash Fiction Friday


Signora del Gioconda, you are looking lovely today!
Stop, Leonardo!
Lisa, you make me crazy when you look at me that way!
I said stop!
I cannot, Lisa, te amo, run away with me!
You tell that to all your models, Leo!
No, bellissima, I do not!
DO TOO!
I must have you!
Paint, Leo....


This is a recycled 55 that Logo and I wrote last year....even with Charles FABULOUS 55 flash fiction word counting tool, I remain uninspired. Alas! If you hate counting words, you will love the new tool! Be sure to run over and thank Charles for his invention. I apologize for recycling...but some of you may not have seen this one before.
Have a lovely weekend, people!
41India

17 comments:

Charles said...

Susie,
Thanks for the shout-out about the tool. I hope it helps everyone as much as it has helped me.

lime said...

ah it happenes from time to time but so many of the old ones are worthy or rerunning.

and that is a nifty lil tool he made for us all.

MONA said...

I am reading it for the first time, so thanks for reposting! It is Fabulous!

snowelf said...

I am also reading it for the first time and I LOVE IT!! Today's 55's have had such wide ranges of emotions!

Happy Friday Susie!!

--snow

Polt said...

I played today...a bit of poetry too. :)

HUGS...

Queenie said...

Great 55, love the picture, we both must have had a yearning for the past with our 55s..

barman said...

Very nice 55 even if it is recycled. I did not think about anything until this morning. I was not inspired. At last something hit me but you know, I have no idea where it came from. You have a wonderful weekend too.

Oh and are you calling Charles a tool? Just kidding. I did not use your tool this week Charles but only because it was more convenent to not be online this time. I did take a peek before and all I can say is very nice.

smarmoofus said...

I'm new here, so this one is new to me. I love it! Anyway, I've posted, (and linked back). I hope this group is of the-more-the-merrier mentality.

http://smarmoofus.com/

Sophia said...

I must have missed it the first time! I loved it this time though! I played today....I promise to visit everyone's on Monday to comment! It's been a very hectic day.

Flash said...

I loved it because there are stories of divinci being quite the flirt!

thus the small devilish smile.

Great 55!

Snow White said...

Susie,
I just read it for the first time and thought it fantastic! I hope to figure out how to use Charles's tool soon... it will be so much esier than writing in Word and then having to reformat it in blogger.

MIke Kilgore said...

recycled but still entertaining! I must get my mojo back.....did I leave it here?

Polt said...

Susie,

This has nothing to do with 55, BUT, I LOVE Rufus!!! Saw him at the 930 Club in DC back in like 2002 or 2003. Was outSTANDing!!

cathy said...

I didn't post a 55 this week but I am going to look at everyone else's

I usually compose them in a word document and use the recount button to count the words.

cathy said...

mmm. Inspired by snowelf I posted a Saturday 55.

G-Man said...

I loved it Susie!!
It was new to me too!

...Shut up and pass it!
xoxox

WDKY said...

Can I just say that I was looking at the real thing not too long ago?

No? Oh, okay... :-(