Friday, November 16, 2007

55Flash Fiction Friday


Bound to the chair, the frightened beast struggles to break free. Wicked stainless steel instruments of various sharpness line the tray table. Overhead lights blind the unfortunate victim. Panic ensues.
In one violent moment, the beast rips itsself from its prison, leaps out of the window and is gone.
Next time we'll take the nitrous!
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Uh yeah, had lots of fun at the dentist yesterday with Little Rita....tell you what, hormonal 11 year old girls with supernumerals (the extra teeth, remember?) do not with the dentist mix well. We have to go back and try it again, this time with nitrous...poor kid. (If i'm nice, do you think she'll share that nitrous with me?)
Let us know if you wrote a 55 today so we can send the posse over to check it out. Notice I said WE? Ok, so heres the deal, I am going to India and you are all gonna have to carry on without me ya know, checking each others 55 out, commenting....using G~mans blog to report in! :D He he I know he'd love the job n all, since he's just so darn helpful, arent you G~man?
And do NOT forget Charles most awesome 55 counter tool, it's most helpful and you can get it here.
33 India

22 comments:

Smarmoofus said...

I'm first? *marvel* YAY! I love your 55, Susie! And perfect photo! Anyway, I'm up. (I'm also plugging AI's counter gadget! I love it!)

barman said...

I so feel for Little Rita. Not a fun thing to be placed into. When a tooth does not want to come out, it does not want to come out. I can just feel the pain and the concern. Better luck with the nitrous. Something I have never tried before. All novicane and funny faces and drooling for me.

Mine is up. Time for me to be down.

Queenie said...

Poor Rita, I'm a lot older and very hormonal, and still hate the dentist. Great 55 susie, mine is up.

Snow White said...

Great 55, Susie!

J is back in action, and did another duet.

Happy Friday!

G-Man said...

Susie...?
I'll do my part...
Everyone is always welcome at my pad..and between the 2 of us we will get it handled!!
BTW..Loved yours..xoxo

SignGurl said...

Daughter #1 had supernumerals as well. Not a pleasant experience, so I feel for poor Rita. I hope she decides to share her Nitrous with you :)

I hope you have an awesome time in India!

My 55 is up.

Top cat said...

frightening and funny 55!
Have a wonderful trip, I'll miss you.:)
tc

Mike M said...

Scary 55!! But great!!!!

Akelamalu said...

Love it.

I did my first 55 today!

snowelf said...

That photo speaks for itself!!
I am not sure if I am playing today or not--something might eventually come to me. :)

--snow

MONA said...

OOOOOH dentist must be a pain!
I feel sorry for the beast!

I played too susie!

lime said...

poor rita. i feel for her. i had to have all 4 eye teeth ripped outta my head when i was 12. awful.

i'm up

Sophia said...

OH MAN that was a great 55...I HATE the dentist as well. Mine is up.

S said...

Smarmoofus, I cannot comment on your blog..it is NOT that I dont want to, and your 55 is great, but...I cant comment there....help!

Mike M said...

Susie, come back to my blog. I need you to see the post below The IT Mikie/Gingerbread Ninja one you commented on. It's involves something with 55FFF and I would like you to participate in it.

Rebicmel said...

Aww I hate dentist too!!!! Great flash have a great weekend.

airplanejayne said...

As a child -- I consistently needed 3-6 shots of novacaine --and could still feel it!

now - one nose full of nitrous, and I'm fine.
just fine....

Tell Rita it'll be okay.

LisaPizza said...

FEED ME SEYMOUR! I love Lil' Shop of Horrors! Besides braces on the top only for 13 months my teeth have been pretty perfect so I love the dentist.Come to think of it,I now remember that my front two top teeth wouldn't come out so I had to have them pulled, but it was a piece of cake. I'd consider a new dentist, perhaps. Fabulous 55, BTW.

Polt said...

Oops, I forgot to post that I played too....although, since mine was rather uninspired and kinda sucky, i guess that's not such a bad thing, eh?

HUGS....

Charles said...

Good thing you put the picture there, this could have been terrifying until the end. I like it.
And thank you for the shout out about the tool. You can check out the gadget version on the bottom of my place. Directions for getting it are in the post Writing 55 Flash Fiction. Plus, I added a button to the gadget that I have neglected to do with the webpage version.

RennyBA said...

Is it okay if I say I just stopped by to say Happy Weekend?

Zoely said...

Hi Beautiful woman,
I was able to say to a friend last night, when he said something like "India is so awful..." blah blah blah, that I *know* someone who is going! WooT!
Also, are YOU urbanprairiegirl @ etsy? Holy sh*t girl I want those bandana pants! I must have them!!
I'm over there too (at Etsy) but don't really sell much, LOL...
Oh & I'm sorry about Rita's experience. I myself have what is apparently an unusual LOVE of the dentist. MMMMM. I could sit there with my spit being drained ALL DAY.
big good juju to you!