Friday, June 16, 2006

55Flash Fiction Friday


He held her hands and looked into those eyes as candle light played off her glowing skin, no denying that tonight sparks would lead to something very special indeed.
Just then, the approaching waiter tripped over her crossed legs and stilletto, which dangled from her toe, sending showers of spaghetti and meatballs onto their smoldering laps.



Ok thats my 55 for today...cant wait to read yours! Now, get busy!

17 comments:

lime said...

LOL, i love it! that would be me with the pasta dripping from my hair and the meatball in my lap

Lelly said...

Hi Susie...too busy to play :( just wanted to say NICE HNT babe...woo hoo!

Suck Me said...

I can visualize that happening!
Great HNT from yesterday. Very stylish :)

Fig said...

I could use a meatball in my lap... it would go nicely with the theme I have going today.

freak

Photocat said...

Ooo la la...chouette!

The Village Idiot said...

heh..baked spaghetti..or something

Logophile said...

Aaaw, a romantic dinner a la clutz.
I love it!
I played over on my blog.

Stephanie said...

Sounds like last nights dinner.

But without the stilletto.

Hypersonic said...

Nice one give me half an hour. It has to be based on a picture, right?

Hypersonic said...

up and ready to be read.

Lelly said...

Tag, you're it Susie!

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Melissa said...

omg, thats actually happened to me.. but it was iced tea and a caesar salad, and my feet werent in the aisle. But.. I wore food on a date. It was horrible. (but really freakin funny!! I laughed so hard when the initial cold shock of the drink over my head wore off)

Anyways, I didn't play yesterday.. my mind was on other things.

Next week for certain though :D

Minka said...

hmmm....I leave the writing to people with enough vocabulary to make it sound great. I enjoy teh reading though, very much!

Minka said...

Ok...octopus and grapes...was there a third?

Gary said...

She looked into his eyes intently, drunk after their tenth glass of wine. "You know", she said slurring her words, "I hope my husband doesn't find out about us".
"You idiot", he responded. "I AM your husband."

Rob said...

Oh the irony......!

"No Alanis....it's not IRONIC.....it's unfortunate but NOT ironic!"

QL